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Post by Shay on Mar 12, 2010 17:42:29 GMT -5
Ah. lol, that would indeed make it tricky. ummmmmmmm I guess we could do the same type of thing with any loner...that is into females, at least.....
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Post by arken on Mar 12, 2010 18:14:16 GMT -5
Hmm well it sounds as if things are slowly being put together piece by peace for many plots. Love, Possible death, Fighting, Fear, Happyness. However I can't help but think we are missing something. Im not sure if you all feel the same but I think theres something we quite havent touched to could really bring a nice seal to the various plots here. Then again I try to over do things and it can be just me.
Arkens a bit on the anonymous side. His past did so much damage that he feels that he is beyond repair. That and the fact that he has been branded with a marking that was said to never exist and ever time he uses it to save his life, he loses more control over his power and even body and mind. He has 2 personalities, the caring one which is female (No it does not make him act female) is Maya, which is why he is usualy concerned about others. and Arken ( Male and Yes his name; but he takes more after this harbinger of death than Maya) Is actually the one that controls his side of insecurity, anger, hate, and is the main source along with his brand for his dark powers as Maya is for his light powers. He is actually a very complex character when you look at him because there is so much going on that its hard to really focus on one aspect of him (Which can be a bad thing).
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Post by Snow on Mar 12, 2010 19:59:09 GMT -5
I forgot you created a homosexual character lol.... Hahaha... and Nevar is asexual (mostly) so its hard for him to really fall in love with someone.. or be affection.
Kohana i would make him need help, but it would be hard for him too.. OOOO maybe i can make him suicidal and Adahi'i comes and catches him in the act?
Like he does something he really regrets like fighting carger... and hurting him that he runs off you know? or maybe he hurts lythium on accident and runs off... or something.
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Post by lythiumjinn09 on Mar 12, 2010 21:58:50 GMT -5
Snow, how about after the weather plot, the forest is damaged and Lythium is trying to grow it back... and she gets in to it with a bear? Kohana can come and save her type deal? Or maybe Koer challenges Lythium and she is left for dead type situation and kohana can come by.... or someone from the loner lands could stumble on her...
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Post by Snow on Mar 13, 2010 12:45:10 GMT -5
Yeah kohana could come save her... use his gift ... making the bear like.... badly hurt (anger issues) and he starts to feel guilty... and feels he's to destructive.. goes and tries to kill himself... but adahi'i or someone could run into him and save him from doing so.  |
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Post by lythiumjinn09 on Mar 13, 2010 20:34:07 GMT -5
Lythium could come to his rescue, that way she'll repay him... I like that idea.
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Post by arken on Mar 13, 2010 21:52:55 GMT -5
Im sorta in plot mode atm so I m just gonna toss se ideas. If its all at possible since Arken has a problem realizing he is actually part of this world maybe someone can come along and show him a thing or two that he is indeed real. Or maybe show him to forget the past and look to the present and future. Which has a potential to be either a love plot or one for friendship. Or it could be all turned around and used to decieve Arken which will then turn things into a fight or rival or something of that sort.
Or another plot which could most likely fit in with Meli which he gets into a fight where hes outnumbered and he gets wounded and gets an infection where he seeks her out because she might have more knowledge of toxins and such and maybe something can happen there.
Hmm..With Lythium there could be a possiblity of having a confrontation regarding Arken entering the packs territory without notice thus creating some sort of reaction which Lythium entagles him and something can happen there a fight, friendship, or something.
With Adahi'i, Arken could quite possibly be hunting the same prey that she is. Preciously wounding a large prey with her toxic bite and now tracking it. Arken can find it and take it down and she notices and thus creates tension. It could easily turn into a fight or a comprimise in which she could let him take the prey but it is poisoned by her and let Arken become poisoned aswell or telling him that it is toxic and thus saving him a rather unpleasant experience.
I have alot more but I rather let it sit here so that I see peoples opinions.
Ah yes I almost forgot. I would also like it if he got into a plot with a male character. Because so far all my plot ideas have been with females and I really think that Arken needs a male rival or friend.
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Post by Shay on Mar 13, 2010 23:40:12 GMT -5
Adahi'i's poison is not toxic to others wolves....  So that's wouldn't work...but she could save him from a much larger creature, and that could make him feel torn between appreciation for saving him and anger that she showed him up... |
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Post by Lanie on Mar 14, 2010 1:39:09 GMT -5
Carger could become more aggressive, but would that develop into something bigger? Like him being overthrown, or someone talking him out of his paranoid, overprotective stage? Because I'mnot sure who that would be. Maybe Nevar, but he might be caught in grief for awhile.
Another thing with Carger, like say he does get into a fight with one of his own pack members or Nevar, maybe he could start doubting himself and sort of just disappear into the loner lands for awhile to get his head straight? He might findsome more loners or maybe Lythium or one of th eother Ileais comes to find him. Or something could happen in Ileai, like maybe Lythium and Koer get into a power struggle.
I could have Liva wander onto the plains and find Nevar when he's by himself. And she could sort of explain some of her past in how she grew up alone, and how maybe to live and lose is better then not living at all. I guess that could happen really anytime soon, unless you wanted something to happen before that, Snow.
Another thing is that Liva is sort of oblivious when it comes to pack life. She doesn't understand a lot of things that you can assume that other wolves know. She doesn't really get the point of boundaries and she doesn't know much about hierarchies or formal ranks. Basically her life was to hunt and explore a land that she knew very well, without any real dangers or predators. So she could be involved in like trespassing on another pack's land and not knowing what she did was wrong or something.
Spir needs some complete enemies, and I feel she hasn't been crazy enough. So I think I'll have her come across someone and just feel like killing something, so they get into a battle. Both of them could get away, but in the future...Boom! Instant rivalry. (:
Or we could always try a subtler technique, like maybe her trying to pick off a pack member but always disappearing before anyone can see her.
Any volunteers? XD
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Post by arken on Mar 14, 2010 9:54:11 GMT -5
@shay: Hmm, that could work since Arken is one for pride. He could probably be angered that he had to be saved and feels he is weak. OH!! We could have that the large creature gets away then maybe Arken even goes into some slight depression that thinking that he couldn't even take care of himself. He could then come to his senses and thank Adahi'i and they get into some conversation about their powers and lives or something. Then when they are resting up, Arken sneaks away unnoticed and tracks down the creature again to prove to himself that he is strong enough to take care of himself and it can go on from there.
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Post by Talen on Mar 14, 2010 10:41:17 GMT -5
How about while Arken is tracking the animal it leads him into the plains where he meets KAden, and Kaden's powers can help him track it. Kaden agrees to help because there's a dangerous animal on Aquene's lands. And then Nevar finds out there's another loner on his land and he looses it because of what happened to Mawla. They bring the animal down, and then Nevar realizes that them being there was a good thing, and it helps him get over th whole thing.
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Post by arken on Mar 14, 2010 12:40:26 GMT -5
 Ahh, i see where your going with that Talen. Sounds quite promising really. Hmmm, any more things we can add to spice things up? |
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Post by Snow on Mar 14, 2010 13:10:22 GMT -5
well it all sounds great.... but something needs to trigger Nevar before that plot happens... because Aquene are suppose to hunt together... so i was thinking... if something trigger Nevar, and he tells Squall and Kaden to take control, then they all can either hunt together or hunt when they please. Because Nevar isn't there to tell them to hunt together.... if that makes since. Lanie: Wapi would of been the right choice for your picking off. TO bad he isn't in a pack. For Carger, i think anything is right... I mean you could make him normal, and like nothing happen. But secretly he was hurting... and maybe one day he snaps... but it was only a little snap. Like yelling at kohana for playing to rough with a pup or something. Then he can take is break... But that thing about Nevar can work, if we find the trigger before it. Or maybe Kaden and Squall just tells Nevar to take a walk and come back when your ready type of deal.. like giving him a large speech.. if they double team it, he would have no choice and will agree.. i mean it would be simple, and then the loner being on the land could Trigger his anger.. i think that could work ...  And for Meli, her poison is usually only to create harm. I mean she can attract an animal to her if you were hungry and to weak to hunt. Squall could help him though, he knows his plants... and so does lythium, so she could help. I mean Meli could tell you what type of poison is running in the system but thats all. |
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Post by Lanie on Mar 14, 2010 14:08:41 GMT -5
Yeah, I would probably want to stick with a pack member because Spir's goal is to basically create as much dissent as possible. She has an issue with packs, or really lot of organization in general. She might have issues with males with a higher pack rank, because of what her father did to her sister. And fyi, the whole thing with Ilila is that Spir's still not sure whether seeing Ilila is a manifestation of her own insanity, or her powers, or both. And she really doesn't trust anyone enough to tell them, so that could be her issue.
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Post by Snow on Mar 16, 2010 11:29:31 GMT -5
Well to think about it.. Kohana is a female lover.. So you can pick him off?
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So that's wouldn't work...but she could save him from a much larger creature, and that could make him feel torn between appreciation for saving him and anger that she showed him up...
